Monday Daylies | The Treatment The Revised Edition

Hi guys and girls the daylies are ready. The revised treatment is here. I am currently drilling out the final script as I wanted to makes sure people understood the plot and trailer. I added dialogue and change some minor bits. Please comment and be constructive so i can brush it up for Storyboard and animatic tomorrow. The Dialogue I want to talk to Jonno on if you don't mind  as I enjoy your scripted previously.

Treament on the Feliz 2

Hey guys also had another look for a logo this was anotherr Idea I fixed up. It using a symbol as requested. What the verdict?

The Woman on Los Feliz - A Clarification

It was a long day, but we ended the day with a group-created step-outline that we feel properly conveys our intention. This is then for Jonny to write up as a script and take to storyboarding.

TheWomanOnLosFeliz_StepOutline