Monday, 31 October 2011

Monday Daylies | The Treatment The Revised Edition

Hi guys and girls the daylies are ready. The revised treatment is here. I am currently drilling out the final script as I wanted to makes sure people understood the plot and trailer. I added dialogue and change some minor bits. Please comment and be constructive so i can brush it up for Storyboard and animatic tomorrow. The Dialogue I want to talk to Jonno on if you don't mind  as I enjoy your scripted previously.

Treament on the Feliz 2

Hey guys also had another look for a logo this was anotherr Idea I fixed up. It using a symbol as requested. What the verdict?


  1. If something was exploding inside or outside it it would look more like a burst of creativity.
    Otherwise its very contained unless that is what you were going for?

  2. If possible can you change Mave's last name in the treatment to Cecily?