Wednesday, 19 October 2011

Script - First Attempt

Right, so to begin to story-boarding process we need a script! I think we're all aware that we've perhaps slipped a little in productivity, but I think we can get ourselves back on track this week. Please read over this and give me feedback as soon as you can!

Writing this also highlighted something we've barely thought about... enviroment design! This will of course derive from Lyn-Dae style choices, but it's something we need to bear in mind.

The Woman on Los Feliz - Script

1 comment:

  1. I like it!
    Some things i'm not to sure about though, is the "to capture a hero's heart?" is that the only suggestive thing that can be put there?

    Also when the poster gets shots should it shoot her through the chest like 'he broke her heart' kind of thing?

    Other than that I don't really have any complaints ^^